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Personal Statement
Applied Program: Aerospace Engineering
"One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse
to soar" I must say that I am genuinely grateful to Helen Keller for
articulating what I have long cherished in the innermost recesses of my mind. At
the same time I also congratulate myself on having chosen flying as my one-time
career, for it has imparted to me both the impulse and the desire to soar in my
life.
Ten years ago when I was an undergraduate from the Department of Mechanical
Engineering of Tsinghua University, or even 5 years ago when I just entered the
China Civil Aviation Flight University, I had the stubborn notion that, for the
rest of my life, I would stay on the ground working either as a mechanist
engaged in mechanical designing and the technical improvement of materials. It
never dawned on me that I would transcend all the matter-of-course outcomes
resulting from my five-year undergraduate studies to become a pilot of
international flights, for at that time the idea had never occurred to me that a
person could fly so freely in the infinite universe of his life.
In 1990, I sailed through the highly competitive National University Entrance
Examination to become an undergraduate in Tsinghua University. Out of my
instinctive interest, I chose to study in the Department of Mechanical
Engineering. My 5-year solid studies at this most prestigious university in
China allowed me to establish a profound theoretical groundwork in mechanical
engineering and to develop an in-depth understanding of mechanical dynamics and
its operation principle. During my graduation internship, I discovered that,
because of the airborne sand, the cylinder piston ring of the desert vehicle
which did not receive alloy surface treatment frequently incur friction damage
and breaking. This not only created great hindrance to the normal operation of
desert vehicles but also seriously jeopardized the life and security of
personnel doing field work in the desert. Driven by my sense of responsibility,
I chose The Surface Alloy Treatment of the Cylinder Piston Ring of Desert
Vehicles by Laser, a highly difficult technical subject which constituted part
of a research program of the National 9th Five-Year Plan, as the topic of my
graduation design. I was responsible for organizing a research team to conduct
designing, processing and analyzing involved in the investigation. In order to
arrive at the perfect ratio of different substances to be contained in the
alloy, I undertook innumerable experiments which were coupled with innumerable
failures. Sometimes I would stay in the laboratory for days without knowing the
lapse of time. During this difficult but equally exciting period, it was
Edison's motto Success Means Standing up Once More After Failure that sustained
me. With due efforts, we concluded the research satisfactorily, not only scoring
significant technological breakthroughs but also yielding impressive practical
profitability.
After graduating as an undergraduate from Tsinghua University in 1995, at the
strong recommendation of the University, I took part in a screening test
administered by Air China for the recruitment of civil aviation pilots. With my
impressive personal performance, I distinguished myself from the a total of
20,000 participants as a qualified candidate and entered China Civil Aviation
Flight University in Sichun Province where I studied aviation theories and
techniques, aerodynamics, meteorology and other relevant knowledge. In the first
year of my studies at this university, I received the honor of Model Student. On
account of my prominent performance in my studies and flying practice, together
with my strong adaptability, especially with my impressive organizational and
communicational capacity, I was dispatched by Air China in July 1997 to the
Flight Safety Academy located in Florida of the United States to undergo a
one-year specialized training in order to develop myself into an outstanding
pilot on international flights.
During my studies at Flight Safety Academy, I was confronted with even
greater challenges. I made utmost efforts to perfect my English aptitude within
the shortest possible time. I continued to study advanced courses in flight
principles, aerodynamics, federal regulations and a series of subjects directly
or indirectly related to flying. At the same time, I was subjected to the most
rigorous flight training. I did not shrink from any of those challenges.
Instead, I surmounted them one by one, supported by the powerful spirit of
perseverance and confidence cultivated in me in my early childhood. At the end
of this one-year training, I received the Certificate for Flying Commercial
Multi-Engineer Aircrafts issued by the Federal Aviation Administration of the
United States. Hard as it was, the one-year experience in the United States not
only enabled me to acquire the necessary qualifications as a pilot of
international flights, but also helped me to develop some initial understanding
of the American society. In July 1998, I returned to Air China and formally
became its qualified pilot on international flights.
As a pilot, one must be in possession of a strong sense of responsibility and
the spirit of teamwork. This requires that a pilot must be meticulous in every
detail, able to deal with emergencies, and effective in interpersonal
communication. Before each routine flight, I would make detailed flight plans,
conduct careful analysis of the conditions of the airfields that we would land
on, familiarize myself with the air routes and the weather conditions. I pay
special attention to enhance my ability in analyzing and handling emergency
situations. On those occasions when the flight is delayed due to irresistible
factors, my patient explanations to the passengers tend to make them satisfied
and their excited emotions would naturally calm down, facilitating the smooth
settlement of the problems. In recognition of my prominent achievements, my
company conferred on me the Model Pilot Award. All those gradually cultivated
qualities serve as my strong assets for commencing new stages of my career.
Over the past four years, I have traveled to virtually all the major
countries of the world and I have accumulated a 3000-hour record of safe flight.
After arriving at each destination, I can enjoy a brief vacation of 3 to 4 days
in the local city. I would invariably take advantage of such occasions to make
extensive visits to the local society, coming into close contacts with local
traditions and customs. Those experiences have not only significantly broadened
my cultural perspective and enriched my mind, but also developed my ability to
accommodate myself to different cultural backgrounds. Exposure to new ideas, a
cosmopolitan awareness, and increased receptivity are the greatest benefits that
I have been able to derive from those experiences.
My pleasant work experiences make me increasingly interested in my career as
a pilot. But at the same time I have also come to develop a strong concern for
the existing condition of China's civil aviation industry. Because of its lack
of fund and backward technology, plus its belated development, China's civil
aviation industry currently lags far behind the developed countries,
particularly in the field of aerospace engineering. Once again, motivated by my
sense of responsibility to help develop China's civil aviation industry, I am
determined to relinquish my present career and apply to study Aerospace
Engineering at your distinguished university, to embark on a new stage of life.
Technically, I have established a solid foundation for apply for an advanced
degree program in aerospace engineering because of my undergraduate training in
mechanical engineering. My actual experience as a pilot further contributes to
my readiness to combine theoretical knowledge with practical expertise. The most
essential point is that, psychologically, my extraordinary sense of
responsibility for the safety of passengers has cultivated in me the spirit for
pursuing perfection. Such an awareness and spirit will undoubtedly ensure the
maximum success in my prospective degree program as in my heretofore career as a
pilot.
Admittedly, to relinquish my present career means to give up many advantages:
a relatively high salary, a comfortable life, and a respected social status. But
I should say that flying constitutes for me not only a form of career and a form
of working experience. It has also ignited my passion for the future, for it
enabled me to understand the true significance of horizon, that, as a matter of
fact, the horizon of life is akin to the horizon of the sky in which I fly in
that they both promises infinite possibilities. It made me further realize that
an individual's universe is as infinite as his heart is ambitious. In order to
pursue a more exciting future of personal development, it is often necessary to
transcend the mere past. The present decision that I make is by no means a form
of relinquishment, but a form of pursuit, seeking to transcend the status quo
and to strive for excellence, to fly to even higher destinies.
I could never understand why "To be or not to be / That is the
question" can become such a celebrated soliloquy and why the protagonist
Hamlet, the prince of hesitation and indecision, could become such a worshipped
hero. For me, who is well equipped with all my previous qualifications and at
the same time confident about the future, I would say : To Soar or to Creep /
That is no Question!
Recommendation Letter
Dear Sir or Madam:
Mr. Newman Song was one of the undergraduate students whom I taught and my
research assistant in my research programs. My close contact with Mr. Song and
my relatively deep understanding of his character and his academic performance
qualify me as the most appropriate person to recommend this promising young man
who is currently applying for a degree program at your university.
As adviser of Mr. Song's graduation design, I collaborated with him for more
than one year. In this process, Mr. Song left a very deep impression on me. He
possessed a profound understanding of the nature of mechanical engineering.
Moreover, he is rigorous in his scientific mentality and perseverant in his
research stamina. He distinguished himself from his fellow students by his
exceptional capability in making important findings. All those precious
qualities are incorporated in his graduation design.
For his graduation design, Mr. Song concentrated on The Surface Alloy
Treatment of the Cylinder Piston Ring of Desert Vehicles by Laser, which was a
major challenge for an undergraduate. The project involved a considerable amount
of knowledge outside his area of specialization. In order to ensure the
successful execution of the project, Mr. Song consulted a large amount of
technical literature in those related fields and acquired all the necessary
background knowledge for undertaking his research. The project called for
substantial fieldwork and experimentation and Mr. Song tried his best to be
meticulous in every detail. He was independently responsible for the laser
treatment of the product, a crucial step in the entire project, and the
subsequent sampling and testing. His personal efforts contributed importantly to
the final consummation of the program.
Equally impressive is Mr. Song's innovative spirit. During the research, he
came up with quite a few valuable and constructive suggestions. I incorporated
almost all of his suggestions into the actual research. The effectiveness of
those important advices has been fully demonstrated in practice. Another
important factor that contributed to his research success is his readiness to
cooperate with others. He is adept at interpersonal communications coordination.
Consequently, all the problems that occurred in the process were smoothly and
speedily worked out.
On the basis of his heretofore prominent performance, I fully believe that
Mr. Song is replete with potentials which will enable him to adapt to his future
academic environment at your university. With all the excellent research
facilities and invaluable instructions by the renowned professors that your
university provide,
Yours Faithfully
Professor of Mechanical Engineering
Supervisor of Ph. D Program
Tsinghua University
钱老师手记
本篇P.S.的主人公为国际航班的飞行员,毕业于清华大学机械工程系,申请Aerospace
Engineering专业。
在为本篇P.S.设计开头的那几天中,凑巧在我进加油站加油时收音机里面传来了我所需要的主题:"只要有在蓝天翱翔的冲动,便绝不会有在地上爬行的欲望"。很快,就查到了Hellen
Keller的这句名言,用在这位飞行员身上再贴切也不过。
接下来,整篇P.S.的主线也顺理成章地得以确立,从具体到抽象的层面上,"飞翔--飞越"。所谓飞超,即是放弃目前其优厚的物质条件,而赴美求学,进行更高层次的追求。
此外,本篇P.S.还突出了其作为国际航班有几千小时飞行记录的飞行员的特殊素质:飞遍欧美而形成的对西方文化的亲身了解,高度的责任感与机组的团队协作能力。当然,在专业方面,着重描述了其本科engineering方面的背景,及飞行驾驶方面的学习与工作经历,将Aerospace与engineering有机地结合了起来。
为了增强其人文色彩,结尾处引用了莎士比亚的一句经典名言。没想到这给这位申请者造成了麻烦。他说他得赶快回去通读莎翁的Hamlet原文,以便今后能与其美国导师就该剧进行对话。